Saturday, September 21, 2019

Product summary draft 1

The article “Tesla’s Autopilot: Cheat sheet” introduces the features and functionality of Tesla’s self-driving platform, called Autopilot, which aims to convert electric automobiles into completely autonomous ones. Although Autopilot is unable to fully replace the need for human drivers, it is able to assist the driver with convenience and safety features.


Vehicles with Tesla’s Autopilot make use of multiple sensors, cameras, radar, sonar, and GPS to create a precise map of the objects around it, even allowing it to read road signs. The car would be able to automatically adjust its speed and stay within its lane when moving on a highway, along with warnings for the driver if the vehicle gets too close to other objects and it is even able to stop itself if there is a risk of collision. Furthermore, it can do advanced tasks such as parking itself and being able to drive to the user’s location. 


Nick Health, Retrieved on 21 September 2019 from
https://www.techrepublic.com/article/teslas-autopilot-cheat-sheet/

Commented on Mitthoon and Amirah's summary.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Darren!Interesting article! Thanks to this article I've learn more about Tesla and its uses. My suggestion would be to check ur punctuation allocations again!

    ReplyDelete
  2. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hello! Your article about Tesla Autopilot and how it is really useful in building autonomous vehicles really sounds new to me.This summary is short and straight to the main point which is a good thing.

    ReplyDelete
  4. This article was clearly described in the first sentence. His referenced website was cited properly(APA format). He stated his product key points in detail. He also described the functions of his device in fine detail. He paraphrased his points precisely. Multiple points of information were squeezed into one sentence which could have been broken down. By Mitthoon and Ben.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hi Darren,

    Your summary is very well written and really engaging. You have summarised the key points well and have also used APA citations to great effect.

    Cheers,
    Jauhar

    ReplyDelete